Hey Bad Man... I never know what to think of your music.
I'm a classical man... filled to the brim with poetry and soft strings... I never had room to understand heavy metal. But I know talent when I hear it. Your singing is much improving with every song. And damn that guitar is so sexy I just love it to pieces. Thats why I always want it in my music. Speaking of which... I have a solo spot for you on my next song... and only you will do.
Damn I'm listening to those guitar licks and shit now and... damn.... just damn.
Thanks, my friend. Heavy metal is no different. But before I get into it... A guy named "Angelsdontkill" did the guitaring here. He will be pleased as hell to see that you adore him too. And I think more that its...metal..slowly getting a hold of you. Metal isn't all that far from classical, you know. haha.
So, as far as poetry goes..I really wrote this song based on...well. Our society doesn't have much dignity left in it, as a whole. And then flipped it to really represent an anger based song. Blaming the Gods for their sins...causing this whole ridiculous scenario. As in, if we were created in Gods image, why in the hell are we so fucked up. haha. Or something like that.
I am totally ready to do that solo for you, and again thank you for the opportunity. I hope I won't let you down. If you don't catch me on messenger...you can email me the song, or the part you want solo'd over...and I'll email back. But hopefully I'll catch you online.
Thank you for the review. Means a lot to me, dude.\m/
Here are the lyrics if anyone is interested
The Sins Of Gods
I look up
Every Night
Pray my soul
Has done it right
I've seen
So many things
I can feel
what evil brings
The darker nights
The faster days
a life lived through
Eternal haze
Brought down
To my knees
Can't appease
The Sins Of Gods
We are broken
Eternal Suffering
No deliverance
No Free offerings
Take the road where
fire burns red
Then you live it
And are not dead
(X2)
I say
To the sins
That in the end
No one wins
Now light turns
Into Dark
Becoming home of
The sins of Gods
Stand in place to accept your fate
No mercy givin on this day
The crashing of the thunder stops
Now appease the sins of Gods
You are my,
I am your,
we are all
Everyones Everything has come and gone
So deliver us
Deliver you
The day breeds a lot of spawned intentions of Darkness.
You're Sorry
You're Hungry
For my tears and
Beg for forgiveness
But found none
cause I am gone
Its your fault
You're sorry
You're hungry
For my tears and
Beg for forgiveness
But found none
Its your fault,
The sins of Gods.
First of all, the whole thing is almost perfectly composed and probubly looks just as good on sheet music as it sounds. You can really do wonders with those fingers sir. However...
It is very clear that you have indeed taken Lessons my friend... and although not a bad thing, it's almost a hinderance in style. Let me explain...
Every note seems perfectly timed... right where it should be... it lacks that human touch. But most of all... it lacks sustain. Do you have a sustain pedal? It would probubly single handedly eliminate the choppy outline of this masterpiece all on it's own. If used right...
It's a marvolous piece of piano and you deserve great credit for it. But it's time to break away from all you've learned and feel the music and let it weave fluently rather than presicely.
I await you next pieces... and since Zero voters suck you get 5/5.
:D
Yea I should really start to use that damn sustain pedal... I'm not really used to use it ;).
I've once thrown everything overboard since I stopped taking lessons but It's true that I'm playing with a lot of precision. I just love to play exactly on and between the notes ;).
To get a really fluent piece I need to work a lot on my way of playing and/or I need more instruments :).
Thanks for the review and I'm also waiting for your new masterpieces ;).
Let me tell you something. I cannot inspire greatness... there is no one on earth who can do that. Something within you... much stronger helped you create this... beautiful... amazing piece of piano work.
Believe it or not... Your piano skills have far out-weighed mine... The strings at the end...jesus christ almighty.
This has a very very professional air to it...
Which is why I must ask what software or equipment you used to create this. Don't take it the wrong way... but it's very difficult to stomach that such great composers grace newgrounds... and deliver so powerfully on their first submission. I would like very much to believe that this is you... and not copywrited work.
My apologies for being forward... if this is indeed you... you have a fan in me.
Well lets see buddy. This is certainly a great piece, so beautiful and well rendered.
The piano work really started well and stayed with a constant flow of beauty and artistry. Remarkable.
It could just be my imagination but I think those strings don't do this piece justice. The woodwind you used was a nice touch... alittle shrill... but good none the less. And the trumpet surprised me but was a nice addition as well.
Overall, a great piece of work that shows a growing level of talent within you.
You asked me to have a look at your song. So here I am. Thankyou very much for the review btw.
You know I love the chords in this. Sounds like the kind of chords I'd use.
My recommendation that I think would make this song amazing... is rather than use abrupt cords and notes, use sustain... hold the notes... don't echo them... but make them flow.
Keep up the good work and I think if you want to add vocals to this... you should go right ahead... just make sure you have a decent mic for the job.
Take care mate and good luck your work.
Sincerely,
MMD
8/10
4/5 (Thats what I want to give it... but I'll actually give it a 5 cuz I know there are always zero voters who suck)
first of all... your wonderfully talent. I haven't heard the song you've remixed but I sure can appreciate the beauty of this classical composure.
Well played, well sculpted... the quality of the track could be increased (I'm not sure what aparatus your using to record), but besides that I really hope to hear more from you in the near future.
I'm going to download the original of this song because it sounds great.
Well done... a 5 from me.
for the record your the first review I've written since I left a year ago. I'm back now and very much liking what I hear.
I believe the original track is by PPK - Resurrection.
I was in a hurry to submit because I haven't posted in months besides that techno one..
I didn't do much mastering. I could've done a lot more with the instruments. heh.
I am very grateful that I would be your first review since you've been back. Great to have you here. Will be checkin up on you.
Don't take offense to this... but I had no idea you were so freakin awsome.
I have alot of catching up to do if I want to download your music.
Great use of strings... leads... piano... e.t.c. Actually I absolutley love it when the strings come in at the end.
Jesus... with some mastering... you could sell a song like this. I'm not kidding... I know a few guys in the marketing sector who have sold lesser work than this.
haha I just can't believe I missed you all this time.
ok ok you've alluded to it enough that I guess I owe you a review.
First off great guitar music. A perfect musical composition.
On an unfortunite note... some words in the lyrics were difficult to understand, and some notes seemed a little off. Of course I have nothing against bad_man he is my favourite guy ever. But it generally doesn't take much from the piece anyways because the rest of the singing is absolutley stellar.
A very profound view of christmas and a beautiful song mate.
Thanks for your vote, MilkMan-Dan! You voted 5 for A world so cold, raising its score from 4.45 to 4.50.
How could you?... how could you create something so absolutley christmas epic?
Why Mr.Orr... why?... :'(.
I don't stand a chance now. I could have worked 100 days on a piece and never have it come out like this. Good grief. There is so much to it... so proffesional... as always.
I was afraid of this. But I suppose it could be worse... I could lose to winterwind. :P
Well... thanks for the christmas spirit in the pretty package anyways. Your still one in a million.
MMD, flattering words, but I think you are exaggerating a little. There are a lot of great submissions that have been entered into the contest. I was a little disappointed that Winterwind and some of the other "greats" didn't enter, I would have loved to see what they would have come up with.
At any rate, thanks for the review! I'm always checking your page for new material, so submit something new ASAP :)!
Hey this piece would make a great contribution to any Christmas flash. Really full of life. I think Christmas jazz is wicked... I actually had this one version of jingles bells jazz I used to play, it was alot of fun.
With this piece I think your only problem is dissonance... just odds notes here and there.
Besides that though, great work and good luck mate. And thanks for your review.
The Sins Of Gods